建议位置:高3·上;原创能力递进,不等同于学校实际学期/人教版单元。只训练书面英语。每个编号计一道练习;编号内小项不重复计数。
学习目标
- 根据不同写作目的选择解释结构或论证结构
- 把理由展开为机制、例证与意义而不是口号
- 提出并回应合理反方意见并进行多轮修订
- 在“艺术、城市空间与审美判断”语境中区分常用词义、搭配并完成新的书面迁移。
核心讲解
1. 不是所有题都写信
“解释博物馆为何保留普通物件”需要解释文;“是否应允许游客触摸复制品”需要观点论证;“向馆长询问信息”才是询问信。先识别交际目的,不能统一 Dear…/I am writing to…。
2. 段落展开链
主张→为什么(机制)→具体例子→例子支持什么→适用限制。例:复制品允许触摸→触觉帮助理解形状重量→体验复制织机的操作→能补充文字介绍→原件脆弱,不宜同样触摸。例子不是装饰,也不能由一个例子推出“所有人一定学会”。
3. 反方与回应
让步应认真承认成本或风险,再说明如何限制:Although replicas require maintenance, limiting access to supervised sessions may make the cost manageable。不要构造“反对者都懒惰”这样的稻草人。
4. 三轮编辑
信息轮:是否回答问题,是否有题目要求细节?逻辑轮:理由是否真正支持主张,连接词是否准确?语言轮:时态、一致、非谓语、搭配、指代和标点。词汇高级不抵消空论证;准确普通词优于误用罕词。
主题词汇拓展:艺术、城市空间与审美判断
下面的词条按本课情境扩展意义与搭配,不是课标完整词表。先把词分成“人/物、行动、性质/关系”三组;同一中文词不保证英语可互换。每条搭配示范本课采用的义项。读完语境再做新增的两项迁移题;能认出词义但不能在句中正确使用时,仍应保留为待复习项。
本课词汇与搭配
| 词条 | 词性 / 条目类型 | 核心义 | 语境搭配 |
|---|---|---|---|
| replica | n. | 复制品 | a durable replica |
| original | n./adj. | 原件;原始的 | protect the original |
| tactile | adj. | 触觉的 | a tactile activity |
| durable | adj. | 耐用的 | durable materials |
| supervise | v. | 监督;指导 | supervise visitors |
| interpret | v. | 解释 | interpret an object |
| context | n. | 背景 | historical context |
| accessible | adj. | 易使用的;可到达的 | accessible controls |
| represent | v. | 代表 | represent a community |
| household | n. | 家庭 | household objects |
| supplement | v./n. | 补充 | supplement written information |
| resource | n. | 资源 | limited resources |
| aesthetic | 单词 | 审美的 | an aesthetic judgement |
| artistic | 单词 | 艺术的 | artistic expression |
| sculpture | 单词 | 雕塑 | a public sculpture |
| installation | 单词 | 装置艺术;安装 | an art installation |
| portrait | 单词 | 肖像 | paint a portrait |
| landscape painting | 短语 | 风景画 | a landscape painting |
| abstract art | 短语 | 抽象艺术 | interpret abstract art |
| composition | 单词 | 构图;组成 | a balanced composition |
| texture | 单词 | 质感 | the texture of a surface |
| perspective drawing | 短语 | 透视画法 | use perspective drawing |
| proportionate | 单词 | 比例协调的 | a proportionate design |
| curator | 单词 | 策展人 | an exhibition curator |
| curation | 单词 | 策展 | careful curation |
| collection | 单词 | 收藏品集合 | a public collection |
| exhibit | 单词 | 展品;展出 | an interactive exhibit |
| installation cost | 短语 | 安装成本 | estimate installation costs |
| public space | 短语 | 公共空间 | share public space |
| urban design | 短语 | 城市设计 | participatory urban design |
| pedestrian | 单词 | 行人;步行的 | a pedestrian area |
| plaza | 单词 | 广场 | a public plaza |
| courtyard | 单词 | 庭院 | an open courtyard |
| streetscape | 单词 | 街道景观 | improve the streetscape |
| amenity | 单词 | 便利设施 | public amenities |
| landmark | 单词 | 地标 | a local landmark |
| identity | 单词 | 身份;特征 | community identity |
| belonging | 单词 | 归属感 | a sense of belonging |
| inclusive | 单词 | 包容的 | inclusive design |
| participatory | 单词 | 参与式的 | a participatory project |
| functional | 单词 | 功能性的 | a functional design |
| ornamental | 单词 | 装饰性的 | an ornamental feature |
阅读材料
主题词汇语境:艺术、城市空间与审美判断
A sculpture in a public plaza may serve as a landmark, but artistic value is not its only consideration. Pedestrians need clear routes, maintenance has a cost, and residents may disagree about community identity. A participatory design process can reveal these differences without guaranteeing a single shared taste. The curator’s task is to explain the choices and invite informed responses, rather than assume that an ornamental feature automatically creates a sense of belonging for everyone.
例题解析
弱段 Museums should use replicas because they are good. Everyone likes them and they are very meaningful. 改写 Museums can use durable replicas to explain objects that visitors cannot safely handle. For example, lifting a model of a traditional water container reveals why its handle and weight mattered in daily work. Such activities can connect design with use, provided staff explain which features of the replica differ from the original. 改写用具体机制与限制代替good/everyone;也避免将复制品当真品。
练习
判断任务体裁:①解释旧车票为何有历史价值;②是否应把所有展品数字化;③询问团体参观预约方法。每题给合适结构。
扩展理由“Community gardens are useful”:写两句,分别给一个具体机制和一个有边界的例子。
修复绝对化主张:Digital displays always make every visitor understand history perfectly.
把两句连成有意义的让步回应:Replicas cost money to maintain. Supervised sessions can reduce damage.
写100—120词解释短文:为什么普通生活物件值得博物馆保存?须含两个不同理由、一个具体例子和一个证据限制,不写书信。
写120—150词观点短文:博物馆是否应提供可触摸复制品?明确立场、两个展开理由、一个真实顾虑及回应。写后按量规自查,不以是否同意范文评分。
【主题词汇·辨义】区分aesthetic/functional、inclusive/identical、landmark/landscape painting,并说明“大家口味一致”是否为participatory的必要结果。
【主题词汇·迁移】写40—55词开放观点:公共艺术设计应考虑什么?至少使用public space、functional、identity中的两项;必须有一个真实权衡。
参考答案与解析 · 完成练习后展开
参考答案与解析
①解释文:现象/对象—历史信息—例子—限制;②议论文:立场—理由—顾虑/回应—有边界结论;③询问信:目的—具体问题—回应请求。三者不能全套邀请信模板。
示例:Community gardens can provide a shared task through which neighbours meet regularly. In an area where residents have little outdoor space, a small garden may offer a practical place to exchange growing advice. 机制为共同活动促接触,例子明确适用条件;并未承诺所有邻里冲突消失。
Digital displays can help some visitors understand aspects of history, especially when they provide clear context and accessible controls. 删除always/every/perfectly,明确条件和部分作用,而非完全否定数字展示价值。
Although replicas cost money to maintain, supervised sessions can reduce damage and help keep that cost manageable. 前件承认顾虑,后件给缓解而非声称成本消失。
示例:Ordinary objects deserve a place in museums because they reveal how people organised daily life. A worn bus ticket, for instance, may show the cost of travel and the routes available to workers. Such objects also preserve experiences that official records may overlook. A repaired cooking pot can suggest how a family cared for limited resources. However, an object does not explain itself. The ticket alone cannot tell us how every passenger felt, and one pot cannot represent all households. Museums should therefore connect everyday objects with dates, records and personal accounts, while making clear where an interpretation remains uncertain. 量规15:两理由4;具体例3;证据限制3;结构2;语言3。
示例:Museums should offer carefully selected replicas that visitors can touch. First, handling an object can reveal features that a photograph cannot show. The weight of a model tool, for example, helps explain the effort required to use the original. Second, tactile activities provide another route into an exhibition for visitors who find long written labels difficult to use. This does not mean that every original should be handled. Replicas require cleaning and maintenance, and a simplified model may misrepresent historical materials. Museums can respond by choosing durable items, offering supervised sessions and explaining how each copy differs from the original. Used with these limits, touch can supplement careful observation and written context rather than replace them or the work of knowledgeable museum staff. 量规20:立场2;两条展开理由6;顾虑/回应5;组织3;语言4。内容可反对或条件支持;不要求套用本结论。
aesthetic关注审美,functional关注功能;inclusive让不同人能参与/使用,不是每个人完全相同;landmark为地标,landscape painting为风景画。参与过程可呈现分歧,不保证统一品味。
示例:Art in a public space should connect with local identity without preventing the area’s everyday use. A striking sculpture may attract visitors, but its position should leave functional walking routes and accessible entrances. Residents should be able to discuss these trade-offs before a final design is chosen. 量规8:立场2;具体权衡3;词义/语言3。
订正与迁移
先遮住答案独立完成,再为每处错误记录“语境线索—适用规则—我的新例句”。隔一天换一个主题复做,不以背熟本页答案代替迁移。完整篇章写作按题后量规人工核查,短句产出按答案中的结构与信息要点自查;不把示例当成唯一答案。
课程与来源说明
原创高中书面英语能力递进课;参考人教版必修—选择性必修的能力梯度,但未取得学习者学校的准确版次和教学表,年级/学期仅为建议学习位置,不等同于官方教材单元对应。课标以2017年版2025年修订为当前版本;不把2020年文本称为最新,也不声称已逐条核对2025全文。考试形式参照已核验的江西/新课标公开说明;不含听力。
本课讲解、例句、语篇和题目为原创。来源链接用于课程/考试形式定位,不表示转载官方试题或逐句对应教材: