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18 高二上综合:结构、限制与论证

在新语境中整合复杂时态和非谓语

本课教材定位与编排说明(暂定参照)

原创高中书面英语能力递进课;参考人教版必修—选择性必修的能力梯度,但未取得学习者学校的准确版次和教学表,年级/学期仅为建议学习位置,不等同于官方教材单元对应。课标以2017年版2025年修订为当前版本;不把2020年文本称为最新,也不声称已逐条核对2025全文。考试形式参照已核验的江西/新课标公开说明;不含听力。

完整来源与范围

先修建议:17 议论文:主张、证据与反方限制

建议位置:高2·上;原创能力递进,不等同于学校实际学期/人教版单元。只训练书面英语。每个编号计一道练习;编号内小项不重复计数。

学习目标

  • 在新语境中整合复杂时态和非谓语
  • 辨认名词性/状语从句并保留逻辑
  • 用恰当限制表达研究结论

核心讲解

建议55分钟,总分80:1—6各5分,7—8各10分,9为10分,10为20分。多空或多要点题按答案列出的独立要点等分;需要解释的语言题形式占3分、理由占2分。所谓“提高”不是使用越长的句子越好,而是句子结构与证据关系都准确。最后的短论证允许不同立场,按证据和推理评分。

读题时把 measured(测量)与 inferred(推断)分栏。语法填空必须解释主被动、逻辑主语或时间参照点,不能只凭“读起来像”。

阅读材料

Original assessment reading: The Quiet Room Trial

Before the survey began, a school had converted one classroom into a quiet study room. Another room remained a shared space where quiet conversation was allowed. Over a two-week trial, volunteers recorded how many students entered each room. At the end of each visit, users could complete a short questionnaire about concentration and comfort.

Most quiet-room users said they could concentrate better there. They also liked knowing that conversations would take place elsewhere. However, students chose their own room, so those entering the quiet space may already have preferred independent study. The rooms also attracted different numbers of visitors on different days.

The project did not compare test results. Its organisers argued that the findings justified keeping the room for a longer trial, not declaring that a particular arrangement of desks would raise everyone’s grades. They wanted to learn whether the same pattern would appear during busy exam weeks and whether the space was equally useful to students with different study habits.

例题解析

示范 After the data had been checked, the team published them → Having checked the data, the team published them。前句从句主语 data 被动;后句分词执行者 team 主动。不能只删 After 和 the data,保留错误的被动关系。

练习

  1. 材料中研究直接记录了什么?没有直接测量什么?

  2. Which limitation is explicitly mentioned? A. No student entered the rooms. B. The trial lasted only two weeks. C. The rooms were in different countries. D. All questionnaires were lost.

  3. 用中文解释末段为什么没有直接宣布“安静空间提高成绩”。

  4. 填词:By the time the survey began, one classroom ___ (convert) into a quiet study room.

  5. 改写为分词状语并保持主语:After they had compared the records, the researchers noticed a difference.

  6. 选择 that/what/whether:The question is ___ the difference would remain during exam weeks.

  7. 改错并解释:Using the quiet room, the students’ grades were improved by the furniture.

  8. 用 although 改写且保留逻辑:The trial was small. It provided useful questions for further research.

  9. 用45—60词概述研究发现及限制。

  10. 写90—110词观点段:学校是否应保留一个安静学习空间?需明确立场、两个理由、一个证据限制和一个具体评估办法。允许赞成/有条件赞成/暂缓。

参考答案与解析 · 完成练习后展开

参考答案与解析

  1. 记录房间使用人数、学生自报的集中程度及是否喜欢房间;未直接测量考试成绩或长期学习提升。必须区分主观感受与学习结果。

  2. B。原文指出 two-week trial。其他选项无依据或与材料相反。

  3. 样本时段短、学生自选房间且不同房间可能吸引不同学习习惯者,观察到的差异未排除其他原因,更未测成绩;因此只能提出进一步检验的问题。

  4. had been converted。过去参照点 survey began 之前已完成改造,classroom 为受事。

  5. Having compared the records, the researchers noticed a difference. compare 的执行者是 researchers,且先于 noticed。

  6. whether。表语从句表示未决“是否”,不选 that 或 what;从句结构完整而不是缺名词成分。

  7. 示例:Using the quiet room, the students reported better concentration. 原句主语 grades 不能执行 using;还把自报专注偷换为成绩、把家具直接定为原因。也可用完整从句改写,必须保留证据边界。

  8. Although the trial was small, it provided useful questions for further research. 不再加 but,small 与 useful 构成让步。

  9. 示例:During a two-week trial, users of a quiet room reported better concentration and generally welcomed the space. However, students chose which room to enter, and the project did not measure achievement. The findings therefore support further investigation rather than a firm claim that quiet rooms improve grades. 量规10:发现3;自选/时长或指标限制4;合理结论1;语言2。

  10. 示例:The school should keep one quiet study room for a further trial. It offers students a choice when shared areas are noisy, and clear rules may make independent work easier. The initial project suggests that users valued the space, but it does not prove that their grades improved. Students selected their own rooms, so existing study habits may explain part of the difference. Over the next term, the school could record room use, ask about concentration and compare the quality of completed tasks, while checking whether the room remains accessible to different groups. 量规20:立场2;两理由4;准确证据与限制5;具体评估4;组织2;语言3。

订正与迁移

先遮住答案独立完成,再为每处错误记录“语境线索—适用规则—我的新例句”。隔一天换一个主题复做,不以背熟本页答案代替迁移。完整篇章写作按题后量规人工核查,短句产出按答案中的结构与信息要点自查;不把示例当成唯一答案。

课程与来源说明

原创高中书面英语能力递进课;参考人教版必修—选择性必修的能力梯度,但未取得学习者学校的准确版次和教学表,年级/学期仅为建议学习位置,不等同于官方教材单元对应。课标以2017年版2025年修订为当前版本;不把2020年文本称为最新,也不声称已逐条核对2025全文。考试形式参照已核验的江西/新课标公开说明;不含听力。

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