七至九年级原创英语读写课程 · 9年级下学期 · 第4课
适用与边界:按初中知识依赖循序推进,不冒充学校教材的精确单元顺序。全部短文、情境、题目为自编,不含听力。文中的80与95是本课程练习目标,不是中考分数承诺。
学习目标
- 识别请求、邀请、询问、建议、道歉和回应等功能。
- 利用上下轮信息补出自然且一致的句子。
- 完成选句式和开放式对话,不凭单词复现猜答案。
核心讲解
对话是一连串相互响应的行动
先确认人物关系、场景、当前问题。A问Where,B回答地点;A提供帮助,B表示接受或谢绝;A提出建议,B评估可行性。某个选项单独语法正确,不代表放这里适切:—How was the trip? —Twice a week答非所问。
邀请Would you like to...,回应愿意I'd love to;但I'd love to, but...通常婉拒。请求Could you...可答Sure/I'm sorry, but...;许可May I...可答Of course/I'm afraid not...;建议Why not/How about...,回应That sounds good或说明约束。祝贺Congratulations用于成就,不随便拿来回应普通谢谢。
道歉回应要符合情境:I'm sorry I'm late—That's all right, but please let us know next time;不把对方造成的严重影响轻易一概无所谓。问病情或困难时以关心和建议合适帮助为主,本课程不作诊断。问路购物旅行为书面文本,不要求音频或口试。
选句式检查语义、语法、人称、时态、时间地点;开放式可有多种自然表达,评分看功能是否实现、信息是否连贯,不只机械匹配唯一字符串。补完最后读完整对话,尤其注意后句Yes/No的指向和it/there的先行信息。
本课词汇与搭配
词义按本课语境给出;同一词可能还有其他含义。先遮住中文回忆,再把搭配写入自己的句子,不只抄单词。
| 词或短语 | 本课意思 | 常用搭配或用法 |
|---|---|---|
| arrangement | 安排 | make an arrangement |
| apologise | 道歉 | apologise for being late |
| congratulate | 祝贺 | congratulate someone on |
| offer | 提供 主动提出 | offer help |
| accept | 接受 | accept an offer |
| decline | 婉拒 | decline politely |
| direction | 方向 指路 | ask for directions |
| appointment | 约定 预约 | make an appointment |
| available | 有空的 可获得的 | be available on Friday |
| suitable | 合适的 | a suitable reply |
主题阅读与词汇扩展 出行服务与书面协商
以下为同课主题拓展的已讲词条,每条包含本课释义、搭配和原创例句。可遮中文回忆,再改写一个例句;不是要求一次背完,也不冒充官方完整词表。
| 词或表达 | 本课意思 | 搭配 | 原创例句 |
|---|---|---|---|
| reservation | 预订 | a room reservation | The message confirms a room reservation. |
| receptionist | 接待员 | ask the receptionist | Ask the receptionist about the current opening time. |
| check in | 办理入住或登机 | check in at the desk | The notice explains where to check in. |
| check out | 办理退房 | check out before noon | The booking message states when to check out. |
| delay | 延误 | a train delay | A train delay changes the arrival time. |
| miss | 错过 | miss a connection | The traveller may miss a connection. |
| return ticket | 往返票 | buy a return ticket | The passenger asks for a return ticket. |
| single ticket | 单程票 | a single ticket | A single ticket covers only the stated one-way journey. |
| aisle | 过道 | an aisle seat | The traveller asks whether an aisle seat is available. |
| baggage | 行李 | baggage rules | Check the provider's current baggage rules. |
选读脚手架:这段主题阅读用于在语境中复现词汇,不要求初次学习就独立认出所有词。先读后面的中文问题,再找谁、做什么、为什么;未列入词表的难词可查阅或请教师解释,不因出现过一次就计作已掌握。
原创主题短文
In a fictional service exchange, a traveller writes that a train delay may make her late for an event. The organiser replies with the current entry time and asks whether she wants to keep her booking. The traveller does not demand a guarantee that the train will arrive. Instead, she asks about the next available session and whether changing the booking has a fee. The conversation succeeds because both sides separate known rules from uncertain travel timing.
读写示范问题:合理提问为何是“是否有下场/改订费”,而不是要求保证列车准时?
证据解析与迁移:主办者能回答活动与改订规则,不能控制列车。书面对话依据权限与事实提问,避免把不确定行程当已确认;本例不代表真实供应商政策。
以上是有解析的教学示范,不另计入独立编号练习;计分任务总数见练习区。
例题解析
例1:A: I’m planning to visit the science centre. B: ___ A: On Saturday afternoon。中间应问时间When are you going?/When will you go?;不能问How far...。
例2:A: Could you help me carry these books? B: Sure. Where should I put them? 接受帮助请求后询问放置地点,功能连续。
例3:A: You look worried. B: I can't find my project notes. A: Let's check the classroom first。建议针对具体问题,比泛泛Don't be sad更有行动信息。
练习
作答要求:除填写答案或写句子外,非写作题均补一句简短理由或原文依据;答案中说明/依据的分数正用于这一步。开放写作按所列量表评分,不必另写语法理由。
共10个编号任务,每题10分,总分100分;一题多空按答案分项给分。第1—8题为基础区80分,目标至少64/80并订正错因;第9—10题为巩固迁移区。冲刺95%以全课得分除以总分计算,至少需95/100,还要求阅读依据可靠、写作切题,不能只背答案。开放题示例不是唯一答案。
1. G9B04-E01
补问句:A: ___? B: It’s about two kilometres away.
2. G9B04-E02
补问句:A: ___? B: Twice a month.
3. G9B04-E03
补回应:A: Would you like to join our trip? B: ___, but I have a family plan that day.
4. G9B04-E04
补回应:A: I’m sorry I returned the book late. B: ___, but please return it on time next week.
5. G9B04-E05
“Congratulations!”适用于哪项:A同学获奖 B同学说谢谢你递笔?
6. G9B04-E06
将Why not to check the library改正确。
7. G9B04-E07
填空:How about ___ (meet) at the gate?
8. G9B04-E08
说明开放补全对话为何不能只有一条字符串标准答案。
9. G9B04-E09
7选5对话,每项最多用一次: A: I want to visit the community art show. B: (1) A: This Sunday. Are you free? B: Yes. (2) A: In the hall beside the library. B: (3) A: Paper sculptures and paintings by local students. B: That sounds interesting. (4) A: Yes, we do. We can register online tonight. B: Great. (5) A: How about nine at the bus stop? 选项:A What will be on display? B When shall we meet? C How long have you lived here? D Do we need to book a place? E When are you going? F I’m afraid I lost it. G Where is it being held?
10. G9B04-E10
写8次轮流发言(A/B各4次)的书面对话:同学错过活动报名,你说明规则,给可行下一步,最后落实时间;不保证主办方一定破例。
参考答案与解析 · 完成练习后展开
参考答案与解析
1. G9B04-E01 答案
How far is it/the museum? 由距离回答决定how far;地点可用前文已知对象。功能6分,语法4分。
2. G9B04-E02 答案
How often do you...? 需补合情境活动,如How often do you visit the library? 频率功能6分,完整问句4分。
3. G9B04-E03 答案
I’d love to。先表达愿望再转婉拒;I can definitely come与后面冲突。功能6分,解释4分。
4. G9B04-E04 答案
That’s all right/It’s OK。缓和回应后提醒规则。自然回应6分,前后功能说明4分。
5. G9B04-E05 答案
A。祝贺成就;B应回应感谢如You’re welcome。选择5分,区分5分。
6. G9B04-E06 答案
Why not check the library? Why not+动词原形提出建议。修改6分,结构4分。
7. G9B04-E07 答案
meeting。about介词后接doing。形式6分,规则4分。
8. G9B04-E08 答案
同一交际功能可用多种自然句子实现,如询问时间When will you go?/When are you going?;须评信息、语法与上下轮一致。原则6分,例子4分。
9. G9B04-E09 答案
1E时间;2G地点;3A展品内容;4D一般疑问与Yes, we do呼应;5B约会时间与nine呼应。每空1分,功能说明每空1分。C为居住时长离题,F没有清楚it及遗失情境。
10. G9B04-E10 答案
示例:A: I missed the registration deadline for the art show. Can I still join? B: The notice says places must be booked in advance. A: Is there anything I can do now? B: You could ask the organiser whether there is a waiting list. A: Could you help me find the contact information? B: Of course. It is on the notice beside the library. A: Shall we check it after lunch? B: Yes. Let’s meet at the library entrance at one. 内容4分,功能及语法4分,八次发言和落实安排2分。
学习证据与复习
基础区低于64分:返回本课核心讲解,给每个错误贴上“词义、句法、时间、证据、表达”之一,再不看答案重做。达到基础目标:隔两天用不同主语或情境重新造句。冲刺95:将第9题的证据位置和第10题的修改理由写出来;不要把一次满分当成迁移能力。
前置复习:上一课。
课程定位参考:人民教育出版社新版初中英语教材介绍。仅用于教材背景,不表示出版社审核或认可本课程。