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大学书面应用二:邮件、请求与问题说明

写出主题明确、背景充分、请求可执行且语气得体的邮件。

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完整来源与范围

先修建议:大学书面应用一:摘要、释义与来源归属

本课为原创大学书面英语能力课程,不对应统一的人教版大学教材或固定大学年级;不含听力。练习目标只反映本站材料掌握情况,不保证实际考试分数。

学习目标

  1. 写出主题明确、背景充分、请求可执行且语气得体的邮件。

  2. 在咨询、延期和投诉场景中说明事实与下一步,不捏造承诺或情绪攻击。

  3. 在本课主题中理解新增词块的语境用法,并把其中相关词项迁移到新的完整句子。

核心讲解

邮件结构:Subject说明任务;称呼符合已知关系;首段说目的;中段给必要事实;末段提出可执行请求和感谢;署名。礼貌不是无限绕弯,“Could you clarify…”通常比“I am writing this email with the purpose of wanting to…”清楚。

称谓不确定可用Dear Course Team或Hello,不凭空给对方教授头衔。不要只写Dear teacher。请求截止时间须说明原因,可写If possible, could you reply by Thursday so that…;ASAP不是默认礼貌用法。

原创示范:咨询任务范围

Subject: Clarification of the summary assignment

Dear Course Team,

I am preparing the summary assignment due on Friday and would like to clarify one requirement. The instructions ask us to compare two sources, but the example on the course page discusses only one.

Should the final summary include both sources, or should we choose one and mention the other briefly? I have drafted an outline for a two-source comparison and can adjust it if necessary.

If possible, I would appreciate clarification by Wednesday so that I have time to revise. Thank you for your help.

Best regards, Lin

这封信说明矛盾位置、已做工作和明确问题,不责备对方“说明糟糕”。姓名为课程范例。

延期与投诉

申请延期应说真实原因、目前进展、请求新时间;不能把“请求”写成“你已批准”。投诉列出日期、订单/服务事实、影响和期望解决办法,不写无依据的违法或欺骗指控。若只是学习写作,可用虚构场景并明确它是练习。

例题解析

过强:You must reply immediately because your instructions make no sense.

改:Could you clarify whether the word limit includes the references? The two versions of the instructions give different limits. 明确可答的问题比攻击有效;如确有时间约束再加合理期限。

本课词汇与搭配

下列为本课实际讲解的词项;词形变化及同一词的不同义项不等于新增独立词汇量。

词项 本课义项及用法
clarification n. 澄清;request clarification
requirement n. 要求;an assignment requirement
extension n. 延期;request an extension
verify v. 核实;verify a figure
appreciate v. 感谢/重视;I would appreciate clarification
confirmation number 确认编号
alternative arrangement 替代安排
as scheduled 按原计划;available as scheduled

词汇工坊

本表补足本课话题的读写词块,含中学承接和大学应用,不将每项都计为大学新词。先遮住中文解释推测例句,再用自己的句子替换人物、时间或对象。理解义项、掌握搭配、能够迁移是三项不同任务;下方两道迁移练习检验部分关键词块,不代表全部词项已自动掌握。

词项 义项与搭配 原创语境例句
subject line 邮件主题行;a descriptive subject line A descriptive subject line helps the recipient identify the request.
salutation 称呼;an appropriate salutation Choose an appropriate salutation for the known relationship.
recipient 收件人;the intended recipient Check the intended recipient before sending a message.
attachment 附件;mention an attachment Mention the attachment and check that it is actually included.
acknowledge receipt 确认收到;acknowledge receipt Please acknowledge receipt when convenient.
courteous 客气有礼的;a courteous request A courteous request can specify a practical deadline.
follow-up 后续跟进;a brief follow-up A brief follow-up should add context rather than repeat pressure.
enquiry 询问;a course enquiry The enquiry asked one precise question about the task.
resolve a discrepancy 解决不一致;resolve a discrepancy The message asked staff to resolve a discrepancy between two instructions.
reschedule 改期;reschedule a meeting The writer requested permission to reschedule the meeting.
proposed deadline 提议的截止日;a proposed deadline The proposed deadline was a request, not an approved change.
confirmation email 确认邮件;retain a confirmation email Keep the confirmation email until the booking is complete.
redress 补救;request reasonable redress The complaint requested reasonable redress without inventing wrongdoing.
closing 结束语;a professional closing Use a professional closing that fits the message.

练习

先独立完成,再核对答案;开放题须按要点人工评分,不以是否逐字等同范文评分。

1

为“询问图书馆预约规则是否适用于周末”写明确邮件主题。

2

把Send me the file now改为得体请求,并加一个合理用途。

3

改歧义:Can you move it to next week? 需要把什么信息补齐?写一个完整请求。

4

写80—120词延期申请:虚构情景为小组需补核一项数据;已完成正文;请求从周五延至周一。不能说延期已获准。

5

写80—120词投诉邮件:预订的安静学习室在指定时段被另一活动占用;说明日期时间可用占位符;请求解释及替代安排。

6

词汇迁移:译:这封礼貌询问的主题行应说明两份要求之间的不一致,并提出一个明确问题。

7

词汇迁移:译:在申请改期时,应清楚写出提议的截止日,而不能把请求当成确认邮件。

参考答案与解析 · 完成练习后展开

参考答案与解析

1

Subject: Weekend rules for study-room bookings。需写weekend和booking,不要只写Question或Help。

2

Could you please send me the file so that I can check the figures before our meeting? 用途具体;不凭空添加真实期限。

3

补齐事项、原时间、请求新时间。Could we move the project review from this Friday to next Monday? I need another day to verify the figures. 已是请求而非单方面宣布。

4

Subject: Request for a short extension

Dear Course Team,

Our group has completed the main text of the report, but we need to verify one figure before submitting it. The original source gives two different totals, and we do not want to present an unverified number as a fact.

Would it be possible to extend our deadline from Friday to Monday? We are checking the source now and will complete the final revision as soon as the figure is confirmed. If an extension is not possible, please let us know how you would prefer us to handle the uncertain data.

Thank you for considering our request. Best regards, Lin

15分:真实题设进度3、理由3、具体请求3、未假设获批2、结构语气语言4。

5

Subject: Study room unavailable during my booking

Dear Library Team,

I booked Room 2 for [date], from [start time] to [end time]. When I arrived, another activity was using the room, and I could not begin the quiet study session I had planned. My confirmation number is [number].

Could you explain what happened and let me know whether an alternative quiet room is available? I would also appreciate advice on how to confirm that a future booking can be used as scheduled.

Thank you for looking into the problem. Best regards, Lin

15分:可核事实4、影响2、具体解决请求4、语气结构3、语言2;不写“你们故意欺骗”,因题设无此证据。

6

The subject line of this courteous enquiry should identify the discrepancy between the two sets of instructions and ask a clear question. 不把discrepancy直接写成故意误导。6分:信息3,词块2,句法1。

7

When requesting a rescheduling, state the proposed deadline clearly rather than treat the request as a confirmation email. 更自然可写When asking to reschedule, clearly state the proposed date and do not assume it has been confirmed. 6分:信息3,搭配2,句法1。

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