本课为原创大学书面英语能力课程,不对应统一的人教版大学教材或固定大学年级;不含听力。练习目标只反映本站材料掌握情况,不保证实际考试分数。
学习目标
从任务中识别读者、目的、限制与文体,写出明确且可支持的中心观点。
把观点分解为两条不同理由,并为每条安排具体支撑和限制。
在本课主题中理解新增词块的语境用法,并把其中相关词项迁移到新的完整句子。
核心讲解
写作先回答“我在回应什么问题”,不要先背万能开头。题目要求讨论大学图书馆是否延长开放时间,不能写成“读书的重要性”。划出任务动词(describe/explain/argue/propose)、读者和范围。本课侧重提纲练习,须按各题要求完成;教学篇幅要求不等于考试题目的官方字数。
一份可执行的四步提纲
题目:Should the college extend library opening hours during examination weeks?
- 中心立场:The college should extend library hours during examination weeks, provided that staffing and safety can be arranged.
- 理由一:部分宿舍环境不适合集中学习。支撑:共享房间有人早睡;安静空间提供替代。不编“90%学生宿舍吵”。
- 理由二:考试周需求集中。支撑:晚间课程结束后仍有复习机会。与理由一一个谈环境,一个谈时间,避免同义重复。
- 限制与方案:额外人手与成本,先试两周而非全年无限开放,记录使用率后评估。
中心句须可争论、可支撑、范围合适。Libraries are very important过泛;Every library must stay open all night forever过强且无必要。清晰不等于极端,可以支持有限方案。
从提纲到开头
弱:With the development of society, this topic has attracted more and more attention. 它几乎不提供任务信息。 强:During examination weeks, some students struggle to find a quiet place to study after evening classes. A short extension of library hours would help, if the college can provide adequate staffing.
自检
每段是否回答题目?两个理由是否真的不同?例子是可理解的情景还是虚构成真实统计?是否存在合理限制?结尾总结决定或下一步,不突然添加全新主要论据。
例题解析
学生提纲:“I agree. Libraries are useful. Libraries are important. We should study hard.”
问题是两个理由重复且study hard离开政策问题。改为“安静环境—晚课后可达性—人手成本—考试周短期试行”。这样形成决定条件,读者能知道为什么支持、支持到什么程度。
本课词汇与搭配
下列为本课实际讲解的词项;词形变化及同一词的不同义项不等于新增独立词汇量。
| 词项 | 本课义项及用法 |
|---|---|
| thesis | n. 中心论点;a clear thesis statement |
| adequate | adj. 足够的;adequate staffing |
| provided that | 只要/条件是;引条件从句 |
| outline | n. 提纲;prepare an outline |
| support | v./n. 支撑;support a claim |
| constraint | n. 限制;a time constraint |
| outdated | adj. 过时的;outdated information |
| revision | n. 复习/修订;exam revision |
词汇工坊
本表补足本课话题的读写词块,含中学承接和大学应用,不将每项都计为大学新词。先遮住中文解释推测例句,再用自己的句子替换人物、时间或对象。理解义项、掌握搭配、能够迁移是三项不同任务;下方两道迁移练习检验部分关键词块,不代表全部词项已自动掌握。
| 词项 | 义项与搭配 | 原创语境例句 |
|---|---|---|
| prompt | 写作题目;analyse a prompt | Analyse the prompt before choosing a position. |
| audience | 读者;the intended audience | The intended audience affects how much background to include. |
| purpose | 目的;a clear purpose | Every paragraph should serve a clear purpose. |
| position | 立场;state a position | State a position that the following reasons can support. |
| rationale | 理由;explain the rationale | Explain the rationale for the proposed change. |
| feasible | 可行的;a feasible plan | A feasible plan fits the available staff time. |
| proposition | 待论证主张;a central proposition | The central proposition should not change halfway through. |
| brainstorm | 构思;brainstorm examples | Brainstorm examples, then choose the most relevant one. |
| focus | 重点;maintain focus | Maintain focus on the requested decision. |
| scope | 范围;define the scope | Define the scope before making a broad claim. |
| constraint on time | 时间限制;a constraint on time | A constraint on time may require a shorter trial. |
| reasoning | 推理;explain the reasoning | Explain the reasoning between the example and the claim. |
| preliminary outline | 初步提纲;draft a preliminary outline | Draft a preliminary outline before writing complete paragraphs. |
| implementation | 实施;implementation costs | The proposal should consider implementation costs. |
练习
先独立完成,再核对答案;开放题须按要点人工评分,不以是否逐字等同范文评分。
1
任务“Write an email to the library manager proposing one change to room bookings”中,写作对象、目的和文体分别是什么?
2
改写空泛中心句:Online materials are good. 限定到复习使用,不绝对否定纸质材料。
3
判断两理由是否重复:A quiet library helps concentration. / A silent room allows students to focus. 怎样改出第二条独立理由?
4
给“应提供延长开放服务”写一条具体例子,不能编百分比或冒充真实调查。
5
为延长开放时间写一条让步句和一条可操作回应。
6
写一份四行英文提纲,主题是“Should first-year students receive a short guide to campus services?” 包含立场、两个理由及限制/执行条件。
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词汇迁移:译:审题之后,先明确读者和范围,再提出能够用理由支持的立场。
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词汇迁移:译:这个可行方案的理由应包括实施成本,而不只是一个吸引人的目标。
参考答案与解析 · 完成练习后展开
参考答案与解析
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读者library manager;目的propose one change(提出一项改变);文体email。不能写成给同学的宣传海报,也不能只抱怨不提出方案。
2
Online materials can make revision more convenient, but students should choose the format that helps them concentrate. 具体到revision,保留可选性,不说所有人都更适合在线。
3
重复,都谈安静提高专注。第二条可改:Later opening hours would help students whose classes finish in the evening。谈时间可达性而非再次谈安静。
4
For example, a student who shares a small dormitory may need another place to review while a roommate is resting. may及假设性a student避免把想象冒充调查事实。
5
Admittedly, longer hours would increase staffing costs. To limit those costs, the college could test the arrangement during examination weeks only. 第一句承认成本,第二句用有限试行作回应;须针对同一问题,而非泛说“我们要努力”。
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示例:The college should give new students a short, regularly updated guide. / It would help them find essential services quickly. / It could also explain which office handles common problems. / The guide should remain brief and link to current information rather than list details that soon become outdated. 评分10分:明确立场2、不同理由4、限制2、语言2;其他合理理由可接受。
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After analysing the prompt, identify the audience and scope, then state a position that you can support with reasons. identify与state平行,that修饰position。6分:信息3,词块2,句法1。
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The rationale for this feasible plan should include implementation costs, not just an attractive goal. rationale for固定连接,成本是理由评估一部分。6分:信息3,搭配2,句法1。